Reader Feeback
One of this blogs readers(perhaps the only reader), Jason, made a suggestion to use the name Troubling Paradise as the title of the sitcom mentioned in the previous post. This title is actually the property of B. Matt Kubinski of Evigen graphics (I'm plugging for you buddy!), so it's ultimately his desicion if I can use it or not. I hope so, because Jason also emailed me a fantastic idea for a promotional poster.

8 Comments:
I would say you at least part-own the name, Jeremy.. Matt may have conceived of the name, but through all your hard work on the previous blog (of that name), you really fleshed out and expanded what "Troubling Paradise" might mean.
It's kind of like Matt had a baby, and was about to throw it in the dumpster, but decided to let you adopt it instead. He may be the biological mommy, but you have put in the time and effort in shaping that girl to be the beauty we see today.
"Troubling Paradise.... this paradise is pretty troubling. Wednesdays at noon on Fox."
That's one happy monkey!
Happy birthday jerkass!!!! I left a puddle of "reader feedback" in an envelope and airmailed it to you for your special day. Hope it gets there in time!!!!
i'm really upset that that picture of me is circulating the internet. what is this going to do to my upcoming political career?
I think you will do well in the ape vote.
Jer, that is fantastic!!!
You are pretty fucking sick. With me, I picture the scene in my head. I can see it all happening. Frank. Sue. The retarded boy with his arm ripped off. I can't imagine there is any habbit, spouse, or child that can help you. You are totally fucked up...I'm so, so proud.
Here's my critique:
1. It is funny as hell and you are sick
2. you are sick
3. ethnic housekeeper is a must!!!
4. gators and retarded kids being mutilated on an evening sitcom should be on TV.
5. (seriously) the outline/format is very, very impressive. It is not just sick shit...it is effective and I was able to clearly picture the events and dialouge between the characters.
Note to self: This advice is coming from someone who stops on the street and imagines the rocks dancing.
Today I told the Wells Fargo armored truck driver that he had an exciting job, and that I was out of cigarettes. He gave me a cigarette, and told me he had a boring job, too. I disagree. He carries a .44 Magnum on the street at 7:30 in the morning. I am getting coffee for my supervisor a half-hour later, and that is exciting to me. I work in insurance. I finally miss the fun of accounting.
Can you just write 6 shows like that so we can send them to networks and act in your show? We'll send it to comedy central in NY. I really want to do stand up bad, but I'm nervous. Folks here are trying to make me do it. If you beat me to it I'll be very upset.
I've got your Xmas package right here. Die Christmas, die!
Gabe
Jason
NO. Its nothing like i had a baby and threw it in a dumpster. You are sick and know nothing about inteletual property law. jer can use the name. but only because i love him. you sir have problems.
(this is satire folks)
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